Author Topic: writing a god damned story I need help (Links for whole book, bottom of pg. one) (Read 1476 times)

ImperealOfficer · June 30, 2012, 09:35:24 PM

Un private, go ahead and read the forty some pages I have combined.

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MyNameIsYou · July 01, 2012, 03:20:44 AM

In the first 3 paragraphs, you used "briskly" on walked, you might want to change that up

I havnt read anything else

DJ Dash3r · July 01, 2012, 08:38:10 AM

~~tl;dr~~

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ImperealOfficer · July 01, 2012, 09:23:12 AM

tl;dr

Its a book.

Its long, and its supposed to tell a story.

A reading rainbow, its in a book, so take a look!

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