Lava TDM

[Transformer]

This is my Lava TDM


^View from second floor in Old building


^Old Building 2nd floor to 1st floor view


^Bird's eye view of most of map


^View of area when you step out of spawn area


^View of Spawn area to map (Note: you don't directly spawn there)


^View of bridges


^View of Old House from front side.

You spawn in a room that has classes to choose from. Then you spawn in the spawn area.
What can I do to make this better?
Please Critic the build not the post (yes I know the pics are big. I'm not good at posting Pics).

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[Dale]

My only problem is i really don't like that red+brown color scheme, I personally would use glowing orange+undolo for the lava, and grey for the old building. but that's just me.

[PurpleMetro]

It looks a bit bland. Add some terrain or some obstacles.

[Cookieman4276]

Needs a bit more detail, but the basic structure is good :)

[RaIder915]

oooohhhh dear, oh dear, oh dear, .I dont want to look at that bland terrain. It makes me want to remake this... and make it look "a bit better"

[Nachtara]

I like your style for interior, but the terrain is a bit symmetrical and square.

[Transformer]

Okay so terrain needs detail on it. I got that since just about every reply said that. I'll add stuff when I get back on PC. I'll try different lava colors but I'm not sure about different colors. Anything else besides those things?

[morningstar]

It's too square.  Nothing real is square if it's natural. 
Otherwise it's pretty good.  If I could rate it would be pretty high.

[Transformer]

I've added detail and not as blocky landscapes. I tried different colors for the lava but with my colorset it looks better with red.


^Updated Bird's Eye View of map


^Bunker


^Updated View of Map


^Another Updated View of Map


I've been thinking about adding destroyed furniture to the Building. Should I do that?

[lilpappaknox]

I've been thinking about adding destroyed furniture to the Building. Should I do that?

You should. And you should make a spawn area that overlooks like entire map. And probably add some more detail like little lava veins
in the rocks to make it look nice. But, this is just my opinion so you don't need to do everything on this list. But overall, the build looks great; so keep working on the build.

[Transformer]

You should. And you should make a spawn area that overlooks like entire map. And probably add some more detail like little lava veins
in the rocks to make it look nice. But, this is just my opinion so you don't need to do everything on this list. But overall, the build looks great; so keep working on the build.

Okay. Thank You.
Thank you all who has contributed suggestions. The input has made me want to submit future builds (not locking).

[SWAT One]

Lava needs spark-ish emitters and color variation.  I recommend Muffinmix's Emitters.