Formatting != syntax. Nick, what you just showed would be rejected anywhere because it's unreadable, but it would still compile (assuming the compiler ignores whitespace).
Unfortunately, the OP's got some major problems with syntax, which WILL stop the script from working. Instead of being defensive, if you could tell us what you want the script to do, we could walk you through it. As it stands, we're still not sure what you're aiming for, since there are 4 or 5 different ways to show text in a script. Do you want it to only show in the console? Do you want it to put text in the chat? Or do you just want the text to splash for a couple seconds across the middle of the screen?