I made a song in MilkyTracker

[Pentium]

A few days ago I downloaded MilkyTracker to try and create some music, and several hours of blood, sweat and tears later, I ended up with this masterpiece: https://soundcloud.com/chipskate/cheesystuff
It's a 90's Amiga demo-style rock/metal song, using samples from classic Amiga demos. It's my first ever composed song, and despite it's flaws I'm quite pleased with it.

Feel free to rate it as you please.

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[AvailsMew]

I think that made my ears bleed

[.:FancyPants:.]

i'd say that all the instruments you had were great sounding except for the guitar; it sounded a little dry.
the melody to the lead was good, i really liked that, though it starts and ends a bit abruptly (maybe make the volume slide in and out?).
the drum beat was at a nice pace, but it felt a little off beat with the guitar (or vice versa).
the length was good, and the way you put together different pieces of the song was excellent.

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Feel free to rate it as you please.

means x/10, i would definitely give it a solid 8/10 for a great concept, and a good execution. minor tweaks are really all you need.

[AvailsMew]

I agree with Fancy, it was good... but it needs to be less earbleedy

[*FacePalm*]

I agree with Fancy, it was good... but it needs to be less earbleedy

yeah, the main lead is way too loud.

[Pentium]

Thanks a lot for the feedback!
Yeah, I agree with everything you've said. I should've used a better sample for the lead guitar, since the current one doesn't pitch very well. I should also have made the guitar and the drums sync up better, and the outro was made in a hurry so that the song would end. I'll think about this next time I make music, though I have to say that I did pretty well considering I have no experience in writing music at all.