my composition

[Pass]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1txoskQdrHc&feature=youtu.be
what do y'all think??

[Ad Bot]

[Yosher]

really nice!

what did you use to make this?

[Kalphiter]

It lacks a clear melody.

[Titanium Man]

sounded all weird and crumpled up

[Xolerate²]

I like it.