Author Topic: Lyrics help.  (Read 1840 times)

Have you thought about using "brother"?

It's a totally original lyric, I think you should try it.

Um, thanks, but without any knowledge of a rhythmic context, I can't do anything.

Can you post an instrumental version of it?  I can see what I can do with it.

Dressed in an uniform, acting like a janitor
All blue, jumpsuit, why shoot?
Bloodthirsty for the money like a bull
Looking in the eyes of the matador (forget you!)
Carrying 2 cans of paint, security looks at me awkward
I say third floor I’m late, paintin' Jimmy Iovine's office

Holding my breath ‘bout to faint
I’m scared to death that he stops me
Heart beating so loud you can hear the echo in that lobby

And see I'm breaking down if I don’t make it out
Then I’m leaving town with that contract
And I’m spazzing out, grabbin' the A&R out
His chair and I’m taking him hostage

I don’t give a forget, step into the elevator press 3
Now I’m headed up (Heist!)
What they don't know is there is a gun in the paint can
And I’m ready and willing to bust ‘em, I'm loving desperate
Stuck in this recession, now what you think
If I could get signed my life is destined
My future depends on ink

And secretary at the front of the entrance staring right at me
I walk up she whispers go ahead and then gives me a wink


Sappy blues/love songs are always awful.

You're a teenager, write about how much fun your having.

write about black people in your school and how they smell bad
gets you street credit
source: im og as forget

rollin around at the speed of sound
got places to go gotta follow my rainbow
can't stick around gotta keep movin on
guess what lies ahead only one way to find out

trust me on moving ahead
no time for guesses follow my way instead
trust me with what you can't see
chase my lead i'll set you free

follow me
set me free
trust me and we will escape from the city
i'll make it through
follow
follow me
set me free
trust me and we will escape from the city
i'll make it through
follow me
yeahaha

SHE GOT A BIG BOOTY SO I CALL HER BIG BOOTY
(opening)

SHE GOT A BIG BOOTY SO I CALL HER BIG BOOTY
(opening)
oh god lol

WHEN I DIE BURY ME INSIDE OF TWO BITCHES

WHEN I DIE BURY ME INSIDE OF TWO BITCHES
I HAD TO RENT A U-HAUL TO CARRY ALL MY SWAG