Multiple choice adventures suck.
and don't even get me started on farting out stuff because good god just don't
You made this adventure in about 2 minutes. I think that constitutes as farting it out. Unless you have an elaborate plan as to what will happen over the course of the adventure (which you should), you shouldn't really
make one. Also, just an hour ago, you made a multiple choice adventure that was identical to this, as far as I can see from post #1. Why did you change your opinion so quickly? Or do you have masochistic tendencies and like to make things you dislike?
and please don't pull out the "why don't you make an adventure yourself? I bet you can't ooooooh" card because I've been planning it out for months.
and I'm not trying to be dismissive or mean, this is my assertive tone.