Author Topic: Blockland Main Menu Medley *STEAM!*  (Read 8617 times)

Sure there's a base tempo, but it seems buried in sub melodies that don't match well. Then it kinda thins out to a single synth solo that really isn't too enjoyable.
All in all, it's an extremely warbly song and I don't care for it.

Sure there's a base tempo, but it seems buried in sub melodies that don't match well. Then it kinda thins out to a single synth solo that really isn't too enjoyable.
All in all, it's an extremely warbly song and I don't care for it.
sub melodies... what? There are harmonies, of course, but not... sub melodies? There is no such thing as a "sub melody." Look, I don't wanna be rude or anything, but you don't know what you're talking about, I'm sorry. I understand you not liking it and I'm okay with it, but you have to know what you're talking about if you're gonna make claims like that. I beg to differ however, how the parts don't match up. I think they match up fine, but hey, it's my song, so I'm gonna be biased.

this sounds, really, really bad

the item pick up sound isn't so goodly pitched
the jump sound is pitched randomly for some reason
at some points it sounds like it's a different BPM
the only thing that sounds good is the synth but that doesn't sound right alone
not much percussions except in the intro

this sounds, really, really bad

the item pick up sound isn't so goodly pitched
the jump sound is pitched randomly for some reason
at some points it sounds like it's a different BPM
the only thing that sounds good is the synth but that doesn't sound right alone
not much percussions except in the intro
Yeah, the pitches aren't perfect, especially since it's sound effects. I think in the middle of the song, it sounds like the tempo is halved?

I get what they're saying about it being out-of-tune. The synth melody is in the key of B-flat major but the item pick-up sound/error sound's melody is in the key of D major.
Also, "sub-melodies" isn't the correct term; it's "counterpoint" or polyphony. The synth does the main melody while the item pick-up sound does a counterpoint melody.
Very experimental. I'll give it that. Hard to make sound effects into a good song, so I admire the attempt. Kinda sounds like something you'd hear in a demented fun house, honestly.

You see what I'm trying to do here people? This is known as "constructive criticism." Don't just complain about the song being bad, tell him how it can be improved.

I get what they're saying about it being out-of-tune. The synth melody is in the key of B-flat major but the item pick-up sound/error sound's melody is in the key of D major.
Also, "sub-melodies" isn't the correct term; it's "counterpoint" or polyphony. The synth does the main melody while the item pick-up sound does a counterpoint melody.
Very experimental. I'll give it that. Hard to make sound effects into a good song, so I admire the attempt. Kinda sounds like something you'd hear in a demented fun house, honestly.

You see what I'm trying to do here people? This is known as "constructive criticism." Don't just complain about the song being bad, tell him how it can be improved.
We didn't just say "lol this score sucks burn it" We gave him some good suggestions and criticism too

I get what they're saying about it being out-of-tune. The synth melody is in the key of B-flat major but the item pick-up sound/error sound's melody is in the key of D major.
Also, "sub-melodies" isn't the correct term; it's "counterpoint" or polyphony. The synth does the main melody while the item pick-up sound does a counterpoint melody.
Very experimental. I'll give it that. Hard to make sound effects into a good song, so I admire the attempt. Kinda sounds like something you'd hear in a demented fun house, honestly.

You see what I'm trying to do here people? This is known as "constructive criticism." Don't just complain about the song being bad, tell him how it can be improved.
Thanks for the advice.

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Hey I can quote back almost a month

it doesn't fit the way I want it, I know how to make sigs, mum

anyway it still cool




This is really good work, Sax!!
I'm going to start getting back into the community because of the release.

This will be a great addition to my add-ons!

This is really good work, Sax!!
I'm going to start getting back into the community because of the release.

This will be a great addition to my add-ons!
Aw, thank you so much!