[VIDEO] Hellriot Meets Creepe the Camera Man

[Hellriot]

I tried to do a bit better on the voices, but I think that only made it worse.

2:56 to see Creepe's lovey face.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=qMU48reHt5s

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[Daniel.S]

Lol i liked it

[Alanoll]

http://youtu.be/qMU48reHt5s?t=2m48s
uh, loving what?

and are all these voices from the same person???

also what is with the structure of this thing, what's supposed to be going on?

introduction was alright, but there wasn't really a definable conflict, or a sensible conclusion.

it's bad. maybe read up on proper screenwriting. it pays to plan.