how can you keep bias out of an essay?

[Camel]

your teacher sounds incompetent. are you using examples from your parents or peers? because she might be misconstruing that as bias

honestly just post the entire thing dude, she'll never find out

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[otto-san]

yeah see the problem with that logic is that she's the teacher and is supposed to teach you, esp. when there's something you're having trouble 'figuring out on your own' what

if you make it clear you do not understand something and need help from the person whose job it is to help you understand things, there's no reason why she shouldn't provide the necessary information unless she's legitimately just an awful teacher with some kind of sense of elevated purpose to teach kids "the way of the BIG MAN world!!!"

[hillkill]

on monday i'm going to go up to her and basically tell her she's not doing her job and she needs to help me.

[Col. Derontchi]

on monday i'm going to go up to her and basically tell her she's not doing her job and she needs to help me.

It might also help to ask some of your peers in your class about their theses, and what she said about them.

[hillkill]

It might also help to ask some of your peers in your class about their theses, and what she said about them.

i'd rather ask someone with a degree for help than high school students that don't know how to spell elementary words in 10th grade english.

[Col. Derontchi]

i'd rather ask someone with a degree for help than high school students that don't know how to spell elementary words in 10th grade english.

Help is where you can find it. If you compare your thesis to theirs, and what she said about yours to what she said about theirs, it will most likely prove beneficial. Even if theirs is worse than yours, it will still help you.

[Nonnel]

you can't.

[Harm94]

i've talked to the teacher numerous times and she wants us to figure it out by ourselves because "that's how you get things done in life". my teacher's logic is so forgeted.

present both sides of the argument then argue for one that sound better with facts through cited sources