Racing the Thunder:
try to get your hands on some better samples/soundfonts. those strings are quite bad sounding.
composition is surprisingly quite good. Impressed. Mixing and mastering are mostly fine.
use dryer bass tones in the drop; too wet sounding. add some treble bite (crunch, hiss, scratch) to make it less dull.
play with dynamic range more. if you take one thing from my advice, make it this. the bass should absolutely explode on the drop. mix everything down, then add a stuffload of subbass just before it clips. Savant does this and imo, it works quite well. the strings and all other instruments, especially non-synths, should have a sense of finesse and intricacy to them.
7/10