Quick War story

[Sirrus]

Well written, I actually enjoyed reading it. Unlike Architect's story.

I can do better, I felt somewhat restricted.

I want to let my creativity fly like a sparrow.

[Ad Bot]

[pingpeppy]

I want to let my creativity fly like a sparrow.

Oh lord..

[Xoax]

I felt Sirrus's story had too many "I this" and "I that" but overall it was good, lotsa details in thar.

Ontopoic: Ewww.

[Sirrus]

I felt Sirrus's story had too many "I this" and "I that" but overall it was good, lotsa details in thar.

Ontopoic: Ewww.

I find 'I' narratives to be more immersive than something written in 3rd person.

[Ronin]

ITT: Mediocre bathroom reading at best