for a first build, this is surprisingly put together (not spam)
a couple suggestions:
•use flats to make the M on the roof less awkward
•for tables or chairs, use 1x1s or 1x1rounds for legs and a 4x4flat( or something) for the tops, instead of just bricks
•you have space to spell out nuggets :p
like i said, its a good start for a first build, like the others said, practice a lot more before app'ing for a clan with high standards. pay attention to the gallery and see which apps pass and which don't, that will give you an idea on what skill level they are looking for
goodluck
