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Author Topic: The Man in the Cloak [Working title] (Chapter 1)  (Read 1748 times)

Regulith

October 05, 2009, 10:42:26 PM
I'm starting to not like where I'm going with this, it appears I have writer's block and I'm barely done with chapter 1. It might take awhile for me to continue.

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Dippindots

October 09, 2009, 12:08:57 AM
I love writing and some day I will be an author. I hope.
>:D

Menen

October 09, 2009, 12:14:38 AM
Its good, but it needs a better hook. I kinda got bored. D:

JD

October 10, 2009, 02:49:10 PM
Hay, my name's Jack :U

WhatevaGuy

October 10, 2009, 09:44:17 PM
Quote from: JD on October 10, 2009, 02:49:10 PM
Hay, my name's Jack :U

Oh really? Well my name is The Man in the Cloak John.
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