The Adventures of Kris

[JD]

HE'S LUCK NOBODY SAW HIM BUD

forget beat me to it

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[Tingalz]

I don't understand page 6

[Swholli]

You're luck no one saw you, bud.

Yes, was about to mention that. While it does read correctly as far as grammar goes, he then says lucky a panel later, so continuity-wise it's a fail. Typos happen, these aren't the final strips.

EDIT: That is, if it said "Your luck" instead of "You're luck".

[Swholli]

I don't understand page 6

How so?

[Tingalz]

He tries to disarm the bomb, but the principal comes in and arrests him, and then the one bad guy is randomly running while some random, ominous figure is talking to him.

[Swholli]

He tries to disarm the bomb, but the principal comes in and arrests him, and then the one bad guy is randomly running while some random, ominous figure is talking to him.

Well, the principal is a dumbass, in case you missed that with the action figure. He completely forgets that Kris warned him about the bomb, so as far the teachers know, he's there trying to arm it rather than disarm it. I mean, imagine if you walked in on a kid wearing a leather outfit and a bomb in his hands.

Secondly, the bad guy was the one who actually armed the bomb, and the ominous figure is telling him that he's lucky Kris went to jail (being him the only one who could identify the bad guy) and no one else saw him. It's all part of the plot. I promise it'll make somewhat sense later.

[Khorde]

Yes, was about to mention that. While it does read correctly as far as grammar goes, he then says lucky a panel later, so continuity-wise it's a fail. Typos happen, these aren't the final strips.

EDIT: That is, if it said "Your luck" instead of "You're luck".

that was the problem with my untitled comics. I didn't read them aloud before publishing so sometimes they made no sense.

Go back and fix it :o

[JD]

It does make sense, I guess. Makes him sound sinister, like, "you're lucky bud.. ..you're lucky.. *evil chuckle*"