My story i am attempting to type.

[Tom Gunn]

For having an air of explosive energy Rex-Com sure sounds dull. Don't describe your character in a way that completely contradicts how they act.

I re-did Rex-coms description.

[Ad Bot]

[A GUY]

I didn't know you could put stories on forums...
Time to think of ideas.

[Tom Gunn]

Don't let to much get to your head.

[Otis Da HousKat]

I re-did Rex-coms description.

I don't see much, if any, change in his description or with the way you present him later in the story.

I don't expect perfect grammar and structure, but you have some glaring problems in your story concerning these.

[Tom Gunn]

It's ok I plan to kill of little Rex-com anyway.

I'll give him some more energy.

[Flamecannon]

Who's Tom?
:roosteriemunster:

EDIT: Why doesn't anyone read the small text?!

[Tom Gunn]

Re-read the chapter.

[Tom Gunn]

Update

[Tom Gunn]

Bump for later

[Mr.LoLHaX]

There are a few spelling errors.

But I am to lazy to type them. All you need to do is read the story and look. They are pretty obvious.

[A.R.C.]

That robot needs to be ripped in half by a space fungus monster.
But he's not dead and helps the MC from some like, control center.

And Gunn is a forget stupid lastname.

[Tom Gunn]

It's actually a real last name ;)

[A.R.C.]

Still sounds like the most handicapped form of self insertion ever.

[Corbiere]

Kwl

The name would be a bit wierd if the story involves cloning since:
Gunn Clone 1:Hello, i'm gunn a
Cloning guy: You're gonna what?

[Tom Gunn]

Still sounds like the most handicapped form of self insertion ever.

Tom Gunn was ins my stories before I started to use it as a forum name.