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| Riceman:
If a grenade just explode near me I don't think I would just go watch TV, what the heck? If you got the idea from the Scary Story topic I don't think the writing was as good. I don't mean to criticize but this story was not very good. Good try though, if you are going to write again go ahead! I am waiting for something amazing from you. |
| Tapanator:
The new one is up if you want to know |
| Sket:
--- Quote from: Riceman on June 22, 2010, 05:11:18 PM ---If a grenade just explode near me I don't think I would just go watch TV, what the heck? Anyways I guess it's an OK story. If you got the idea from the Scary Story topic I don't think the writing was as good. I don't mean to criticize but this story was not very good. Good try though, if you are going to write again go ahead! I am waiting for something amazing from you. --- End quote --- BOOM lets watch spongebob :cookieMonster: |
| Kobewarrior:
--- Quote from: Rookie on June 22, 2010, 04:09:15 PM ---Lol its SupDog?12 --- End quote --- Remember'd that kid. I laughed so hard at this. |
| burnness99:
Pretty good, although the grammar made it a little hard to read if you're used to reading with correct grammar. (Hooray for not going on blockland for about a week!) |
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