When apping for a clan, attitude should count for something. It doesn't seem like you are giving a happy confident mood. Just for that I would say no unless the build was really good, if I was in a clan I surely wouldn't want people going :( :( :( all over the servers and clan page.
The build is good and shows you have potential, but it needs to be bigger and have more shape to it. Right now it is a long rectangle with some detail.