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With a gulp of breath, I fill up my thruster with my fuel and begen to fly to the light, it looked like a camp when I was flying higher. Still I was afraid if they were going to kill me, since they ignored my fire.
« Last Edit: September 06, 2010, 10:30:21 PM by masterockets »

With my last breath, I fill up my thruster and begen to fly to the light, it looked like a camp when I was higher, now to fly to it. Still I was afraid if they were going to kill me and the reason why they ignored my fire signal.
surely you can explain what is happening a bit better than that

That, and the fact that I clearly posted that I was walking towards you.

....Why does everyone ignore me suddenly?

Name: Nikolas Fekezo
Age: 34
Appearance/Race: Human, about 6.4", Dark eyes
Suit Description: Jedteme Mark VI Governess. Yellow stripe going across torso area diagonally. Red base color. Headset with radio. About 8.4" tall.



I walk a desert holding my M97 assault rifle. Out in the distance I see a blur that vaguely looks like civilization. I suddenly start sprinting towards the "oasis" when I hear a loud revving. I look behind me and see a behemoth transport truck going an excess of 70, ready to hit me. I slam onto the hood and roll back onto the ground. Right before I become unconscious, I see two men. "Is he alright?", says the first man. The second man studies my suit and says, "Cracked faceplate, may have a concussion and a broken collarbone. He's in bad shape.."
 
« Last Edit: September 06, 2010, 08:59:14 PM by Comatose »



I walk a desert holding my M97 assault rifle. Out in the distance I see a blur that vaguely looks like civilization. I suddenly start sprinting towards the "oasis" when I hear a loud revving. I look behind me and see a behemoth transport truck going an excess of 70, ready to hit me. I slam onto the hood and roll back onto the ground. Right before I become unconscious, I see two men. "Is he alright?", says the first man. The second man studies my suit and says, "Cracked faceplate, may have a concussion and a broken collarbone. He's in bad shape.."
 

I smell a lawsuit.

"Who - me?" I asked over the speaker system, my suits power now fully online. "Why me? Why you? Who are ALL of you people?". The speakers on the suit thundered as I spoke these lines. "What are you all doing here?"
'Oh, hi there' I say to the main mounted in his suit. 'I'm Zoge, I was wandering around these woods looking for some bastard who took a very valueable possession of mine'. I twist my arm and Green lightning's blade retracts. 'I heard someone shout and though something may be wrong'.

"I finally made it!" I say as I glide towards the camp, waiting for someone to notice me, and suddenly I see a blood. I felt like running, but I knew that they would have to help me. I shouted towards the the one in the green suit, "Mr.greensuit! can you help me get into the camp?"
« Last Edit: September 07, 2010, 05:28:17 PM by masterockets »

"Who - me?" I asked over the speaker system, my suits power now fully online. "Why me? Why you? Who are ALL of you people?". The speakers on the suit thundered as I spoke these lines. "What are you all doing here?"
"I'm wandering the wastes in search of a way to make a living. The name's Bexq." I said. I climbed into The Baron and prepared to go.

I smell a lawsuit.

What..

Why, in the entire world, do you smell a lawsuit?

EDIT: Continuing...

I wake in a medical pod, an IV in my arm. I look out the window and see my suit, being repaired by the men who hit me. I guess they're doing me a favor. I see people moving around in throngs. They seem interesting, as they all seem to be going the same way.

After regaining my suit, I walk outside and see a man shouting to another in a green suit. Perplexed on what's happening, I walk over putting my rifle in it's charging apparatus.
« Last Edit: September 07, 2010, 07:11:25 PM by Comatose »

Is this taking place in the same place we are at? You can't really just start writing a backstory and never finish, it doesn't make sense.

What..

Why, in the entire world, do you smell a lawsuit?

EDIT: Continuing...

I wake in a medical pod, an IV in my arm. I look out the window and see my suit, being repaired by the men who hit me. I guess they're doing me a favor. I see people moving around in throngs. They seem interesting, as they all seem to be going the same way.

After regaining my suit, I walk outside and see a man shouting to another in a green suit. Perplexed on what's happening, I walk over putting my rifle in it's charging apparatus.
No rings this is my thingy, you can't be in it >:u

Just kidding, but we're in the woods by the way. and your introduction doesn't make sense.
Wait, the woods or the desert, I'm confused D:?
Well, if we're in the woods I think we're positioned like this:

And clown is down here somewhere
« Last Edit: September 08, 2010, 02:05:31 AM by Supreme Guy »

Yeah, we're in the woods with a desert nearby to one side and the mountains distantly in another.
Also if you could keep track of location with those sweet looking pictures that would be awesome.
Also I wanna do a bit of railroading to lead up to something more, I'll start writing it up soon - basically, no major actions/starting fights or anything for a little bit.
I'm the GM, so yeah. It won't be too long and it will lead into something.

Oh, ok should I restart? I can if you want me too.

i shot bad guys with lozors and dey die!

i shot bad guys with lozors and dey die!

i troll forums with stuff posting and they think im cool a douchebag!