Your Writing Sucks

[Night Fox]

When my dad's computer starts working, I'll share with you guys the beginning of a pretty good story.

It's about human-lizard beings that are trying to take over the world. Cliche', I know.
But so far, I have just barely introduced this species, and only have one fully human character so far.

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[IkeTheGeneric]

OMG OMG WTF HAHA

[Night Fox]

OMG OMG WTF HAHA

It's pretty good so far.

I'm going to try and get my mom to take me to my dad's house this weekend, so I can post it.

[JTBreslow]

Ah, wow, that's the first grmmar natzi fail I've seen in a while.

That is the joke.
I wanted to see peoples reactions.

[Deus Ex]

"oh crap i failed t being a grammar national socialist better say it was a joke!"

[IkeTheGeneric]

"oh crap i failed at being a grammar nazi, better say it was a joke!"

What

[Deus Ex]

Samsung Impression has no quote button.

[SuperBryno]

reading is for nerds

your english teacher must have hatted you.

[Camera]

That sounds a little foolish.

[Narkro555]

But so far, I have just barely introduced this species, and only have one fully human character so far.

Inb4It goes where TwoKinds went

[A.R.C.]

your english teacher must have hatted you.

Yes they hat me very much.

[Night Fox]

That sounds a little foolish.

But it will get better.

I started writing it when I was 10, haven't worked on it since.
WILL BE BETTER.
SOON.

[mrlolop]

Yes they hat me very much.

was your teacher a haberdasher?

[A.R.C.]

I got a B- in theory of hats

[Narkro555]

On the topic of wonderful writing:



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