Oh come on, you can do better than that.
The streets of ______ are usually loud. Today isn't different.
Several cars zoom on the pavement and make the city seem like a race track.
-Zooms into a red car speeding across the street-
*Beep beep beep beep, beep beep beep beep*
John, focused onto a white car, hastely pulls his phone from his pants
John: Can't you tell I'm busy!?
-John heavily sighs, reframing from the phone. The light has gone from yellow to red fast. He has lost sight of the white car-
John: Great, I lost sight of my target. What do you want Alex?
Alex: Don't you use that tone at me! Look, I got a new hit for you.
John: Oh come on, I'm already trying to get this other prick off the streets.
-John lumps into the cushions of the seats and breathes deeply in and out-
John: All right, fine... How much will I get for this new hit?
Alex: Well, I was trying to tell you, this hit is about 15,000 bucks more that the heist you're currently on.
-John jumps from the seat and places his hand onto the steering wheel-
John: More money's what I like to hear! Give me a name and details and I'll pin him down...
-The street light turns green then the title fades onto the screen and the opening sequence begins.-
PS I switched their roles
