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Author Topic: Carnage Film Studios (CFS) - I love you all!  (Read 60622 times)

Triple post oo

Snail says he's got an idea for a Christmas short. I like it.
PM me it.



Lazy...

But whatever. I probably can't explain it well, but you'll get the general idea.


Hey, Freeze. I want to re-app. Im off to get on Word, the wonderful magical Word. (The microsoft program, pfft.)


Name: Shafin

BL_ID: 6159

What you are applying for: Scripting and Editing.

Reason For Applying: Because I have a giant need to type a story and send it to someone.
And edit lots and lots of videos.

Experience for the branch/branches in which you are applying for: What. I don't get this last bit.


Please show work in all types of application. Acting is an exception but you may still show work of course. If you do not show work your app will be declined until you DO show work.

Name: CinderTheCat (Sindra is my BL name BTW)

BL_ID: 7049

What you are applying for: Scripting and Acting

Reason For Applying: I used to be in here and during my absence I missed the last check for inactives.

Experience for the branch/branches in which you are applying for: Nothing much, other than first of all getting in for scripting/acting.

STORY AM BELOW THIS LINE
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The Rise of the Consort
Written by Sindra



Chapter 1
The woods echoed. The dead trees creaked, and all that was there was a simple young girl, lost in the Woods of the Consort. The Consort, or often called the Rebels, were completely, and totally against the King of Galen, Toryk. Galen was the continent that she lived on. Her name was Syk, the daughter of Anel, the leader of the Consort.
Syk: Blast! This place is cold.
Trees: *creak* *groan*
Syk: Shut up, trees.
Trees: No.
Syk: ……
Syk: Jesus, this place is creepy.. I hate it when I have to ferry messages to the mail man at the other end of this damn forest.
Trees: *yawn*
Trees: *Snooooore*
Syk: Thank GOD, those trees are asleep.
Trees: Huhwhat?
Syk: Damnit.
Syk: Lalalalalalalala, la la la laa!
Syk pranced through through the woods, completely ignoring the fact that they’re dark and ominous from that point on, until….
Azurd: Rawr!
Syk: Azurd! Blahehaeh!
Chapter 2
Azurd is a Shade who works for Toryk. Shades are horrible, ominous spirits who slaughter many for the evil king. The king seeks to further rule Galen for forever—He’s already been living for many a century. Syk unsheathed her sword, and her Lynzar leaped out from behind. Lynzar are closely related to Lynxes—but they’re either green or purple, and their paws are freaking huge.
Syk: Lyz!
Lyz: *purr* Time to bring down this bastard!
Oh, and did I tell you they can talk?
Azurd: Die, you Consort mongrels!
Syk begins battling Azurd, sword to sword, paw to fist. Azurd whips a horrible gash on her right knee, and it begins splurting blood like crazy.
Syk: Ouchie!
Azurd: BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Syk stabs Azurd through the heart.
Azurd explodes and dark energy begins flying around her, and her mind is filled with his memories as the young Lidnt, who was Azurd before he was overtaken by the spirits he failed to summon correctly.
Sitting in his room, eating bread.
Shooting his first deer.
Hunting for the first time.
Becoming a mage.
Failing to summon spirits correctly.
Then it was all black, and she fell on her back, dumbfounded. She tore off a strip of her fine tunic and wrapped it around her knee, which quickly filled with red spots.
She hopped on Lyz and they rode back to the canyon, Lyenl Canyon, of which homed the Consort in the Ganh cities within the rock.
End of chapter 1 and 2.


Edit: It leaves you wondering what the Ganh are. :D


Edit2: By the way, maybe we could somehow edit this into a video? It could have like, cool canyon and the ominous forest and crap.
Are you reading this? :/
« Last Edit: December 27, 2010, 02:14:19 PM by CinderTheCat »

I'll look over that wall of text tomorrow. Too tired right now. Of course not tired so much that I can't play my xbawks.

But its 2:30.

Edit: Go take a nap and read it later. Otherwise i'll be on Blockland. pff.

But its 2:30.

Edit: Go take a nap and read it later. Otherwise i'll be on Blockland. pff.

It's 7:39pm over here. It's been a looonnngg day.

Ohz. Read it and then go to bed bro
Review it first D:

Story n' stuff
It's okay, although extremely similar to Eragon... I can't credit this as original work, although your writing shows promise. Write something else, and we'll see....