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Nymethus:
The roof doesn't stick out, fulfilling its purpose, this can be fixed by making it stick out. Yeah.

The metallic brickwork that appears everywhere doesn't feel very cozy. It feels cold.

I don't really get the colour scheme; beige with brown trim? That's cozy? Okay...
The walls just seem like excuses for real walls. Everyone knows why. I guess this can be done with simpler builds; it all comes down what actually counts as something bad and something good. Explaining what material this cottage is built of might clear things up.

You forgot the top of the roof.

The lights have no cover, they will be over snowed.

Those planks are from all over the world, perhaps even from other planets. Why?


Those stairs are OK, they could use some adjustment.

Half the second floor is gone. Hugums ate it. You should keep him on a leash.

The balcony appears to be completely open with a flat roof. Doesn't really fit the weather now, does it?



The good part is that the build variates. Hum.


You could have added some light to the "fire" to actually make it somewhat cozy.

light = warmth



--- Quote from: Kobewarrior on October 15, 2010, 07:48:41 PM ---Did I inspire him?
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Only with the title and the idea itself  :cookieMonster:
Kobewarrior:

--- Quote from: Nymethus on October 15, 2010, 07:56:33 PM ---The roof doesn't stick out, fulfilling its purpose, this can be fixed by making it stick out. Yeah. Some don't have to.

The metallic brickwork that appears everywhere doesn't feel very cozy. It feels cold. There will be furniture on it soon, along with carpets.

I don't really get the colour scheme; beige with brown trim? That's cozy? Okay...
The walls just seem like excuses for real walls. Everyone knows why. I guess this can be done with simpler builds; it all comes down what actually counts as something bad and something good. Explaining what material this cottage is built of might clear things up. I honestly don't know what its made of. :3

You forgot the top of the roof. Because I didn't.

The lights have no cover, they will be over snowed. Doesn't light melt snow?

Those planks are from all over the world, perhaps even from other planets. Why?
I have jets.

Those stairs are OK, they could use some adjustment. I guess.

Half the second floor is gone. Hugums ate it. You should keep him on a leash.
I did that on purpose. It makes it look nice.

The balcony appears to be completely open with a flat roof. Doesn't really fit the weather now, does it? I dunno.

The good part is that the build variates. Hum.

You could have added some light to the "fire" to actually make it somewhat cozy.

light = warmth Meh, I guess.

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Bold: Me replying. Hurr.
pwning lord:
Kobe I miss you and your lovey detailing terrain skills. Need to build moar togethar pl0x
Kobewarrior:

--- Quote from: pwning lord on October 15, 2010, 08:10:06 PM ---Kobe I miss you and your lovey detailing terrain skills. Need to build moar togethar pl0x

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Yush.
Treynolds416:
Your attempt at blending bricks into terrain is admirable, but not perfect.
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