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House 2010 [C] Application
Venus:
if i were voting it would be a no because...
the windows are ugly
has no character
only two colours, bland
Sorry but it's 3/10
Caution:
The windows look odd because they're sticking out in a dimension all themselves; nothing else is sticking out like they are. Its fairly bland on the outside, too, I think. Its just walls and windows. I think a landscape could do some good too. The interior looks pretty good to me but this build really doesn't express the skill I thought you had. I also didn't think builds built by more than one person ever worked but maybe I'm wrong.
Good luck, though.
Custard:
--- Quote from: Venus on December 27, 2010, 05:22:40 PM ---if i were voting it would be a no because...
the windows are ugly
has no character
only two colours, bland
Sorry but it's 3/10
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Be practical. How many colors does a normal house have? The windows would look uglier if they were indented, and the character is simple enough to comprehend.
-There's a backdoor
-1 Bathroom
-1 Bedroom
-A living room
-A casual roof
-Double foundation
-Contrast coloring
-and Hardwood flooring
Nymethus:
--- Quote from: Caution on December 27, 2010, 05:27:20 PM ---The windows look odd because they're sticking out in a dimension all themselves; nothing else is sticking out like they are. Its fairly bland on the outside, too, I think. Its just walls and windows. I think a landscape could do some good too. The interior looks pretty good to me but this build really doesn't express the skill I thought you had. I also didn't think builds built by more than one person ever worked but maybe I'm wrong.
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For some reason most windows people make tend to stick out. I'm not sure if you think this is a bad thing in general or if you think that it doesn't work with the simpleness of this house. To me it feels like it adds something to it. Adding landscape could contribute to the build looking better as a whole, but wouldn't actually add anything to the house itself, which is the original build. A good house doesn't need landscape. Of course there's nothing wrong with adding landscape, I'm just saying.
God damnit what am I talking about :panda:
Caution:
--- Quote from: Nymethus on December 27, 2010, 05:48:50 PM ---For some reason most windows people make tend to stick out. I'm not sure if you think this is a bad thing in general or if you think that it doesn't work with the simpleness of this house. To me it feels like it adds something to it. Adding landscape could contribute to the build looking better as a whole, but wouldn't actually add anything to the house itself, which is the original build. A good house doesn't need landscape. Of course there's nothing wrong with adding landscape, I'm just saying.
God damnit what am I talking about :panda:
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Having some issues with getting your point across? Lol.
Windows do look good when they stick out (or in, in some cases) but I don't think it works well here, they look funny sticking out all alone. Landscape would just help for presentation, true, but can also prove his skill further.