Something I'm working on:
You told me to lay off on that other piece and I did, but now here's a little bit of criticism. And this isn't just about this piece, I am also referring to a few on your deviantart. You need to work on depth. Your pieces will always look weird when you have thicker lines where they don't belong. To add to this, there isn't shading where there should be shading (although some artists work without shading their lines are more definitive and striking to do so.) I'm always bothered by the big feet that your characters have. I guess that's more of a personal opinion though. I mean Kingdom Hearts has it and I like how those turned out. I guess it's because it has a higher height than length. Also the head and neck are a bit iffy. But hey, keep at it and you'll get better and better! The things I do like is that your style is more angular than smooth. I think you should kick that up a notch and develop it.
