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So I'm starting on a comic but I hit a dead end and don't know what to do from here

Suggestions?

EDIT: also taking requests for pages before this page too lol, like why he's sticking his syringe in his foot
« Last Edit: November 12, 2015, 04:24:58 PM by Space1255 »


This picture was before the CCB when I actually decided to get juicy at art

Jesus christ, I was stuffhouse

So I'm starting on a comic but I hit a dead end and don't know what to do from here

Suggestions?
pageloss'd

Aaa thanks for the pageloss bump




vvow
if you're gucci with critique, have some, i guess. i may just be full of it, but you'll find some value in these late-night ramblings.

like, one side of the face appears a fair bit wider than the other. it probably has to do with the pretty awkward placement of the nose, it should be closer to the center of the face, and the bottom of the chin shouldn't be that close to the mouth.

try thinking of the human face as near-perfect thirds: the distance from the chin to the bottom of the nose, the nose to the brow line, and the brow line to the hairline should be roughly the same distance. sure, every human is different, but it often doesn't stray too far from that.

but other than that, it's fine, i just needed to kinda nip it in the bud.






vvow
not sure if you accept criticism but: is it just me or is the nose incredibly low?  it's generally supposed to poke out somewhere in the center of the face.  you've shoved it (along with the mouth) so low they're threateningly close to the bottom of the face - to the point where the lips are placed neatly and squarely on the chin of all places.

best advice is probably to look at a skull - it'll show you where facial features are generally placed
« Last Edit: November 13, 2015, 05:42:24 AM by Cybertails1998 »

m8

I've improved so much that it's weird being that being my art

Thank you blf

the sword still looks pretty rad

[img]http://41.media.tumblr.com/cd2c0329471ba617bdebbfd25bfb7a90/tumblr_nxqey6SKxM1ugao9ho1_250.png[/mg]

vvow
Raise the nose. Other than that it's gr8 m8

Yeah I thought the nose was a bit weird

I'll fix it (and some coloring errors) when I get home as soon as I can


Also thanks for the criticism guys, I really appreciate it
« Last Edit: November 13, 2015, 10:56:33 AM by Niff »


something from a something from  something larz


that'd be perfect placement if the eyes were lower
study the relative distances between facial features.