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| DrenDran:
Oh god word wall, where to start: --- Quote from: super flamimninja on February 01, 2011, 05:32:09 PM ---I would like for all of you to stop harrassing me about how stupid this is and his I need more experience. --- End quote --- You're the one who's practically stuff posting. --- Quote from: super flamimninja on February 01, 2011, 05:32:09 PM --- If this is so offencive that you need me too change the plot to fit your idiotic sense of my need for correct grammar and months of experience for my first movie fine. --- End quote --- Not taking people seriously for having no grammar skills once so ever is not idiotic. Having no grammar skills is. --- Quote from: super flamimninja on February 01, 2011, 05:32:09 PM --- The year is 2012. --- End quote --- loving unoriginal. --- Quote from: super flamimninja on February 01, 2011, 05:32:09 PM --- The world has advanced theyr technology to the point of colonizing mars. --- End quote --- In two years we go from almost disbanding NASA to colonizing Mars, so unrealistic it'd ruin a lot of the plot fabric. --- Quote from: super flamimninja on February 01, 2011, 05:32:09 PM ---but others call them them the floggers because of there terrible methods of gaining information --- End quote --- Floggers, is that a word you kinda just thought of now, or does it actually have a meaning? --- Quote from: super flamimninja on February 01, 2011, 05:32:09 PM --- that they couldn't already read off of your mind. --- End quote --- Wait, so they can read minds? Anyway you put this, that ruins any chance of fighting them. --- Quote from: super flamimninja on February 01, 2011, 05:32:09 PM ---Jon a commando sent in to infiltrate the aliens teleported and discover where it went and then to return. A simple reconasaince mission in and out he told his squad. --- End quote --- Wait, so in two years, we're exploring plants, and teleporting? Jon isn't much of a name either, espically without a last name. --- Quote from: super flamimninja on February 01, 2011, 05:32:09 PM ---Please excuse typos because this was done on a mobile phone. --- End quote --- No, type right, don't you own a computer? --- Quote from: super flamimninja on February 01, 2011, 05:32:09 PM ---Any advice will be accepted but critCIAm will be looked down on. Thank you. --- End quote --- IF I DONT LIKE WHAT YOU HAEV TO SAY ILL IGNORE IT OGM |
| Momentum:
I think anyone who makes movies that have nothing but violence are awful movie makers because they can't come up with a good plot so they just cover up the awful plot with violence. |
| The Corporation:
--- Quote from: super flamimninja on February 01, 2011, 05:32:09 PM ---I would like for all of you to stop harrassing me about how stupid this is and his I need more experience. If this is so offencive that you need me too change the plot to fit your idiotic sense of my need for correct grammar and months of experience for my first movie fine. The year is 2012. The world has advanced theyr technology to the point of colonizing mars. Little did we know that underneath the surface was a terrible secret that would change the fate of the galaxy. An ancient breed of creatures some call aliens but others call them them the floggers because of there terrible methods of gaining information that they couldn't already read off of your mind. When they where discovered we tryied peaceful negotiations but our ambassadors were never seen again. The military set up a standard perimiter. This is where our story begins. Jon a commando sent in to infiltrate the aliens teleported and discover where it went and then to return. A simple reconasaince mission in and out he told his squad. Before he even got 30 feet from it plasma discharges flew out into every thing that was not close. He was the only one of his squad that was close enough to survive unscathed. His best friend josh was struck in the leg and hit the ground screaming from the pain of his flesh gradually burning. Jon barely dragged him under neath an over hang on the surface of mars when an entire fleet of alien warships began to come out of the teleported. They were much larger and faster than human ships. Alien drones as we call them now began to search the area for survivors. Drones are floating organic humanoid aliens that can run at leaast 70mph . Just then josh and. Jon fell on a cave that coincidently was directly under them. For hours they sat and listened to the screams of there brothers in arms but suddenley it stopped. The entire cave began vibrating az the teleported moved and more smaller teleporters left it. When it all stopped jon found a way out of the cave. As soon as he left a tear ran down his cheek from the horrible stench of death and blood. The sight was nearly as bad....... that is all to be revealed for now expect more this weekend. Please excuse typos because this was done on a mobile phone. Any advice will be accepted but critCIAm will be looked down on. Thank you. --- End quote --- I'll take that plot. |
| SuperFlaminninja:
Yea the year 2012 is unorigional but I don't care. So what if nasa is abandoning colonizing mars this is fiction and yes I am on a mobile phone because I don't have internet at my mom so I go to my dads on weekends and play then. And who the heck cares if my spelling is bad on a touch screen mobile phone. What are you a teacher. When I am on a computer I will do my best to make you feel better by putting correct grammar. I know you will come by and scan this for typos so next time just consider that touch phones suck on typing. |
| _Dark_:
How the hell does this kid have more subscribers than me? |
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