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Japanese Dojo
Custard:
--- Quote from: Jay the Cartoonist on March 21, 2011, 08:08:11 PM ---No. Too boxy, lacks detail
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"No." doesn't give any consideration towards effort. Stop being an starfish.
I give it a 7.5/10. It shows good effort, and I like the trees and scenery. However, you could make it a bit more complex. You have good support, good coloring, and good placement, but the only thing really missing is complexity, so perhaps work on that.
Very good job overall!
Beach:
Thank you, will do.
Lørd Tøny:
--- Quote from: Jay the Cartoonist on March 21, 2011, 08:08:11 PM ---No. Too boxy, lacks detail
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I'll go with what Jirue said. I like the concept of the whole thing and I like what you were trying to do but it doesn't look much like a Japanese Dojo.
Monocle:
Nice bui-
-looks at name-
:(
Shocklink:
Not to sound mean and I am saying this as the most supportive voice u can imagine but I don't see how this is a Japanese type structure. I believe Japanese dojos or structures have like that unique curvature to it like this one
Unless you were trying to get a modern look like this
Did u did a pretty good job :D