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| Frenchfrie - "Shall your terrible story be burned for loving ever." |
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| Aeschylus:
As many of you may know, I started a topic in Creativity being curious about what others think about my writing. It was about Fallout: New Vegas, and I wanted all of it based on the real storyline. It was, I admit, nowhere near my best writing. I dont do game writing good at all. But I wanted some feedback. Then comes along Sirrus. He was very mean, but what he stated was the truth, so I understood. Then comes along our guy Frenchfrie. . . The first thing he says, I thought he was just trying to be a minour troll. That, or just be a smartass. --- Quote from: Frenchfrie on June 02, 2011, 11:32:12 PM ---The first excerpt made me want to vomit all over my laptop it was so bad. so no. --- End quote --- I wasnt angry at all. I just read this, ignored it, and moved on. Next, he got even worse. --- Quote from: Frenchfrie on June 04, 2011, 10:29:44 PM ---Just stop loving writing. You cant even write an illiterate piece of stuff your excerpts are worse than that for godsakes. --- End quote --- I have no comment. You can see how bad this is getting. Again, read, ignored, moved on. Here's where I was started getting frusturated. --- Quote from: Frenchfrie on June 05, 2011, 07:24:22 PM ---I support Sirrus fully, and your "I wasn't trying to edit" reply was absolutely handicapped. The biggest steps in the writing process are making a rough draft, then editing and revising. If you did not know that and tried to write you will never have a true successful writing career, that also backs up Sirrus as you being a lazy illiterate forget who cuts corners in the writing process. --- End quote --- As you can see, he isnt giving any sort of critCIAm, nothing anywhere near what Sirrus stated. This is clearly just being a pure richard. More, you may ask? --- Quote from: Frenchfrie on June 05, 2011, 08:41:58 PM ---No he should never continue or type another fictional sentence. And he will most likely never be able to better his writing. --- End quote --- I felt this was entirely unnecessary, and not only did he still fail to give any critCIAm, he got even worse than the last post. I cant put in words how frusturated this makes me. With alot of people, I have no respect, but I thought I might point out that there is yet another worthless piece of stuff on the Forums (but that isn't new, right..?). I know he's probably gonna try to back his stuff up on this topic if he ever notices it, but good luck to him. Information - Frenchfrie Profile - Frenchfrie Posts - Posts /discuss |
| Aeschylus:
Double poast. I forgot to add in the PM he sent me after I locked the Creativity topic when I decided I was through with him, which is where the title of this Drama came from. --- Quote from: Frenchfrie on June 05, 2011, 10:55:33 PM ---Thank god you locked your failure of a thread. Shall your terrible story be buried for loving ever. --- End quote --- |
| Stocking:
Sounds like he just really, really hated your story. Is nonconstructive criticism bannable? |
| Aeschylus:
--- Quote from: Stocking on June 05, 2011, 11:20:31 PM ---Sounds like he just really, really hated your story. Is nonconstructive criticism bannable? --- End quote --- I'm not sure, but that, to me, sounded like 1 year's worth of minour raging mashed into a few posts by a single dumbass. |
| uno_da_cat:
--- Quote from: Stocking on June 05, 2011, 11:20:31 PM ---Sounds like he just really, really hated your story. Is nonconstructive criticism bannable? --- End quote --- It really should be. |
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