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Desert UPDATE now a find the keys challenge!
-1 Up:
--- Quote from: -1 Up on June 17, 2011, 09:01:25 PM ---6 / 10.
It has lots of potential.
It, however, needs a lot of detail.
I like the cacti.
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Gah, I just realized I'm a hypocrite.
Anyways, the trees are very..flat and they could use some detail, like more detailed leaves using ramps or somesuch.
The monument is..okay. Not great, but not bad either. It could use some more detail, like emmiters or Paint FX.
Please note that this is my opinion...
Donro98:
--- Quote from: Blockoman on June 17, 2011, 09:21:18 PM ---Positives:
>Monument has potential (Thanks, will expand.)
>Key adds an RPG-"collect-the-items" feel that can be expanded upon ( Will do)
Negatives:
>Completely flat ground, with barely any detail (fixed I think).
>Duplicated cacti (Fixed)
>Flat, boxy walls (Will fix)
>Very few colors used (fixed)
>Palm trees are bland (fixed)
Overall: 4/10
You say you intend for it to be simple, but there is no excuse for something that simple. This is a building game! A couple more hundred bricks won't make you lag! Try to add some more little details and variety into the environment for the next addition. (Will do thanks for criticism)
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Edits in ()Updates, now requires Zone bricks and events, more constructive criticism, and thanks. Rate please. and -1up thanks, and the monument will be updated. I just forgot.
TheArmyGuy:
Deserts tend to not have huge 90 degree walls.
Work on that.
Donro98:
Slight bump for updates!
Bisjac:
i never seen that style of tree on blockland. :D