I can still give feedback, though. Never said I was gonna decide, because my say doesn't mean anything.
This is almost certainly a no, however, and I'll explain why. The overall shape of the house is not very interesting. It's a big box, with little to no texture. The deck railing is too thick to match the supports of the deck, which I think are too spindly, but that's a pretty small thing. The walkway is a good attempt at the stone pathway idea, but it's too patterned, and too wide.
Instead of using prop windows, try designing your own to make them fit in with the house more. The color scheme is fine, much better than the hotel.
Perhaps add a higher ceiling, with a textured floor that isn't just one color baseplate.
That's about all I can see, you definitely have potential I think. You just need more time on the game. With time comes better building skills.
