My Little Pony: Friendship for Blockheads: General V2

[masterockets]

Can't lie, I probably just wrote the best 1.3k words I have ever written in my entire life. I am extremely ecstatic.

Did you proofread it already?
I hope you have a long time to do it if you haven't already

[Ad Bot]

[.Atlas]

Did you proofread it already?
I hope you have a long time to do it if you haven't already

I'll pm you the link and password.

[masterockets]

I'll pm you the link and password.

it's ok I already have it

[.Atlas]

it's ok I already have it

I sent it anyways, better safe than sorry. Beside, you didn't have access to the actual first chapter, even if it's still a wip. The first few paragraphs are my favorite in the entire story. They are totally my writing style, uninfluenced by the story my fic is based on and free from any changes that might be made to the diction and syntax. General grammar and spelling should be fine as well.

[Soukuw]

I hope it not an erotic fanfiction of RD.

[.Atlas]

I hope it not an erotic fanfiction of RD.

Rainbow Dash is not going to be in the story.

[Soukuw]

Rainbow Dash is not going to be in the story.

So it is an erotic fanfiction though?

ugh.

[.Atlas]

So it is an erotic fanfiction though?

ugh.

Not really. There are erotic parts, but they're far down the road and not the main focus of the story. I understand it may not be to your tastes. You don't have to read it, but others may be interested.

[masterockets]

Atlas do you have steam?

[.Atlas]

Atlas do you have steam?

Here you go.

Wow, it got approved fast. I put it up only an hour or two ago.

[masterockets]

Intro was a nice read, I'll give the rest a go tomorrow
there are minor mistakes, one I noticed the most was a misplaced apostrophe

[.Atlas]

Intro was a nice read, I'll give the rest a go tomorrow
there are minor mistakes, one I noticed the most was a misplaced apostrophe

Intro was actually approved while you were mid read. If you feel like it you can go back and point out all those little errors. :D

[Port]

page 10,000 is for vegetarian zombie

[Kobewarrior]

page 10,000 is for vegetarian zombie

no

10k is strictly for luna.

[Port]

no

10k is strictly for luna.

page 10,000 is for vegetarian zombie and luna