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| RedGajin:
Its a pretty good layout and stuff, but in my opinion, the dialogue could have been better. It was good up to the Agereon part, then it started getting bad. But its still good, nice to see someone's making picture stories again, the older ones weren't that good. |
| SirLancelot7:
--- Quote from: RedGajin on July 22, 2011, 05:08:58 PM ---Its a pretty good layout and stuff, but in my opinion, the dialogue could have been better. It was good up to the Agereon part, then it started getting bad. --- End quote --- My thoughts exactly. I tried multiple times to improve that section but I couldn't improve it. It was difficult to balance getting the storyline into it while still keeping it entertaining and easy to understand. |
| SirLancelot7:
bump :c |
| SailorMan:
In the sixth picture where you and Bingo are looking in the bedroom window, you can see what looks to be a creep bear on the BLUPO table... lols |
| SirLancelot7:
--- Quote from: -SailorMan- on July 23, 2011, 03:39:00 PM ---In the sixth picture where you and Bingo are looking in the bedroom window, you can see what looks to be a creep bear on the BLUPO table... lols --- End quote --- c: |
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