Author Topic: Louis' Restaurant  (Read 4771 times)

Been awhile since I've seen something decent in gallery.

Also been awhile since I've seen you around! :P

Good job!

Nice build you got there.

Upon closer examination, some parts just look downright odd. The fencing that encloses the base of the roof looks odd, especially those weird upward extensions that occasionally block them out. You can see that the fencing on the exact roof didn't fit, and the 1x2s you threw in look out of place and could have been fixed by building a fence as opposed to using the bricks. It's mostly just the fine detail that could use some fixes though, as the overall shape is very well constructed.

Tip: To avoid having to oversize the support for umbrellas, change the umbrella from an even amount of bricks across to an odd amount of bricks across. That way you'll have a center where you can throw in something small (x1) like a polebrick so as it won't look so odd.

Thank you for your constructive critism. You got valid points but as you might understand, I just built and didn't really know how it would turn out, so that's mainly the reason not all the bricks fits perfect.

As for the umbrella, I did try to make an umbrella in the beginning as you described, but I didn't get it right, so I drop'd it and made this instead. And, if I had used a pole instead of this one, it wouldn't be centered on my table. Call me lazy but I don't really think this one looks too odd.


Wow thats really nicely done, it looks outstanding, can i see some interior shots. I rate this a 9.5/10

AHHHHH FACADE!!!!!!!

Otherwise I saw it in Spation's server and it was pretty k.

Holy friggen crap,
this would probably take days!
 :cookieMonster:


Holy friggen crap,
this would probably take days!
 :cookieMonster:
Off Topic why are you using treyonlds avatar?

Off Topic why are you using treyonlds avatar?
Its the opposite of his avatar.

This time the fat one walks.

Its the opposite of his avatar.

This time the fat one walks.
Oh ok then.

forgetstuffbitchbadgercunt

that looks like a lego set.
how do I know this isnt?
Spaz.

Off Topic why are you using treyonlds avatar?

At least say something about the post itself. I could ask you the same thing about your avatar.

It's very nice but to be honest I don't like it. The general shape of the building is awesome, there's nothing like a nice shape for a building besides just a square. On the other hand, I really don't like how it's... busy. There are tons of bricks and details everywhere and they all seem to be stealing the attention from other sources of detail. To me it almost appears as if you placed random patterns of bricks and detail all over the place. I know this probably isn't the case but it's probably just me, after all I'm a simple builder. I don't like the roof design much coming off of the top; I feel it would work for a much taller building, maybe eight stories or so, but this seems a bit short for that. I'm also not a big fan of the fencing things on the roof, either, I just think they look odd but they seemed to have found a nice use here. The main sign also looks a bit odd, particularly the one row of the opposite color.

It's very nice, I can definitely see how good building clans would love this, but I don't like it too much. It's nice and everything, it's just not to my appeal. :o

Just because it has many of the same types of bricks that Lego has, doesn't mean it's stolen.
you're stupid for thinking that's why I have a slight feeling this is a Lego set. half the bricks in this game are Lego bricks. what you said there means I could say everything anyone has built on Blockland is stolen. I'm saying it just kind of looks like a Lego set, and whether you did or not, you could of just switched around a couple of pieces that you either dont have from the lego set, cant resemble from the set, or just wanted to make it so it wasnt exactly like the set. Im not saying you did make this from instructions, Im saying it's a possibility.

you're stupid for thinking that's why I have a slight feeling this is a Lego set.

Why are you always insulting people?