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| Gen. Hothauser:
loving god damn MOTHERloving iPod had to loving run out of loving power just as I was loving hitting the loving post loving bu loving tt loving on. I had said a lot of stuff about your awesome plane and now I have to redo it all Looks generally good. Here's some stuff to work on. Wings-engines could use work. Using the jvs fan would be helpful. They are too high up on the fuselage, tops gotta be flush or lower than floor of area. Wheels-got the pattern for the wheels reversed. It's not OO OO OO OO OO OO OO OO it's OOOO OOOO OOOO OOOO The Os are wheels. Also, all eight wheels are on a single hydrolic lift system, not four. Using the wheel prop Wouk solve the wheels' flatness. The tail is too small. Make it larger, add a rudder, and taper the end to a dulled point instead of a smoothed cylinder. The windshield is too narrow, make it wider vertically. Im also noticing now that your passenger windows are small and single 'ply'. In a normal airplane, the windows are doubled up for max safety. An easy fix, just add the same kin of window to that block you have infront of the window. Idk if you did or not, but add spoilers, slats, ailerons, and rudders. I also hope you didnt forget to put the outside lights that blink in the night. My previously attempted post was much better and more descriptive. |
| lego_xbox:
--- Quote from: Gen. Hothauser on September 03, 2011, 01:33:18 AM ---loving god damn MOTHERloving iPod had to loving run out of loving power just as I was loving hitting the loving post loving bu loving tt loving on. I had said a lot of stuff about your awesome plane and now I have to redo it all Looks generally good. Here's some stuff to work on. --- End quote --- Thank you --- Quote from: Gen. Hothauser on September 03, 2011, 01:33:18 AM ---Wings-engines could use work. Using the jvs fan would be helpful. They are too high up on the fuselage, tops gotta be flush or lower than floor of area. --- End quote --- I know that, I'll be doing that soon --- Quote from: Gen. Hothauser on September 03, 2011, 01:33:18 AM ---Wheels-got the pattern for the wheels reversed. It's not OO OO OO OO OO OO OO OO it's OOOO OOOO OOOO OOOO The Os are wheels. Also, all eight wheels are on a single hydrolic lift system, not four. Using the wheel prop Wouk solve the wheels' flatness. --- End quote --- I'm not gonna stuff around with the wheels anymore its extremely difficult to have to change them... and I don't want to use props --- Quote from: Gen. Hothauser on September 03, 2011, 01:33:18 AM ---The tail is too small. Make it larger, add a rudder, and taper the end to a dulled point instead of a smoothed cylinder. --- End quote --- Uh huh, I was going to add small wings on either side of the tail. --- Quote from: Gen. Hothauser on September 03, 2011, 01:33:18 AM ---The windshield is too narrow, make it wider vertically. --- End quote --- ??? --- Quote from: Gen. Hothauser on September 03, 2011, 01:33:18 AM ---Im also noticing now that your passenger windows are small and single 'ply'. In a normal airplane, the windows are doubled up for max safety. An easy fix, just add the same kin of window to that block you have infront of the window. --- End quote --- Yeah I hadn't thought of that, and i need to add safety lights on the floor because of safety regulations :P --- Quote from: Gen. Hothauser on September 03, 2011, 01:33:18 AM ---Idk if you did or not, but add spoilers, slats, ailerons, and rudders. I also hope you didnt forget to put the outside lights that blink in the night. My previously attempted post was much better and more descriptive. --- End quote --- I've added flaps or whatever they use to slow down, they aren't visible in pictures but when you use a lever they appear. Anyway Thanks for for all the constructive critCIAm :D |
| xxjpxx:
Yes definitely add the horizontal stabilizers to the tail (the small wings on the side of the tail). Plane's cannot fly without them. |
| Gen. Hothauser:
--- Quote from: lego_xbox on September 03, 2011, 02:49:27 AM ---Thank youI know that, I'll be doing that soonI'm not gonna stuff around with the wheels anymore its extremely difficult to have to change them... and I don't want to use props --- End quote --- It shouldnt be too difficult, just make a tower of bricks connecting the plane to the grou and replace the wheels. |
| Blockadinator1568:
Nice. 10/10. good build, and decals |
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