Aplems Italian City Center [C] App - UPDATED HOPEFULLY FOR LAST TIME

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TheArmyGuy:
I would have said 'no' because of the lack of interior if I were still in C. But the exterior is fine, and needs no editing.
The present interior is fine aswell. Just add more.
But Drake kicked me for what i believe was liking little skipping mini-equines.

Sleven:
There is too many negative points to actually have a chance at all. It's no from me.

The "paths" that is used at the area has a useless pattern. It would had looked a lot better with just plain grey.
The benches should be one step smaller so the feet stick out a bit and the trees have a too thick trunk for it's height.
As mrc pointed out, the interior colors is not appropriate. Change immediately.
The chairs are too fat and squarish. Try using "a random brickpack" and more rounds.
I like the exterior though, even if it's a bit repeated and monotone colored. I also think you used that "fence" style too much.

Next time you make an app. Do the whole interior and don't block the windows with those horrible colors.

This is just my opinion, so it maybe isn't helping at all. :P
I'm sorry if I wrote anything offensive.

Also, where are my colleagues?

Custard:

--- Quote from: Sleven on December 22, 2011, 11:20:39 AM ---Also, where are my colleagues?

--- End quote ---
hello

I would also like to say that you could work a lot more on this building. It's lacking some key structures that are necessary when designing.

For one thing, the windows don't match the design you're pitching, and they're too large for the exterior walling design you've made.

I think you need to research proportion and theme.

Other than that, you're getting better for sure. Please also work on your environmental work too, if you're going to apply with something that involves a park, or a mountain, or anything green.

you're getting better! ~ <3

Sleven:
ugh, Custard summed it up really well.

I just pointed out details. :(

Sadly, my English fails me when I try to explain stuff.
That's why the criticism usually get harsh and bland.

Nom|Aplem|Nom:
Well like I asked before, what colors do you think should be included on the inside?

The windows are intentional as they are about how big the windows were back in Italy when I was last there about 7 months ago. Me and my friends hung out there all the time so I had a pretty good remembrance of what it looked like.

Sleven I will fix those trees and benches and I will work on the interior colors just can someone suggest what color to use for those?

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