Author Topic: Apocalypse: The Re-apocalyticalizing [Somebody put out his fire]  (Read 169566 times)

I put on the coat. "Well it's a start, but my stupidity probably just made me sick. Thanks anyways." I say before looking around. "Somebody is here. I don't know if it's a crazy or not, but I'm not going to let it kill me." I say as I pull out my ice-axe.

"I don't hear a thing.  And besides, before we go on some crazy duck-hunt, shouldn't we grab that sniper rifle I told you about?"

"The rock is wet, somebody was using it recently. By the time they would have left it would have been dry." I say as I jog around, looking for something alive.

I shuffle my feet against a can, causing a noise. I move a bit faster towards the roof.

Okay, first I'm going to go all grammar national socialist and say that when exiting quotes to make an action, you use a comma, but only replacing a period.  
"I want an apple," said Jim.  
I want and apple!" exclaimed Jim.  

"Wait up, man!" I yell down the hall.  "We should get that gun!  You'll regret not doing it!"  
But it was too late, Kieth was already running up the first flight of stairs.  I grab a stale bagel from ER3 and grab it in my mouth as I pursue my pal.  

You can tell how much of a grammar national socialist I am when I  have more lines about grammar than RPing. 

I hear something that isn't footsteps, then faint footsteps. I sprint off in that direction instantly.

Okay, first I'm going to go all grammar national socialist and say that when exiting quotes to make an action, you use a comma, but only replacing a period. 
"I want an apple," said Jim. 
I want and apple!" exclaimed Jim. 
Well that's how I type ngr.

"I guess I'll meet him at the roof if that's where he's going."  I grab my .22 and limp as fast as I can to the stairs.  "This is going to be hell on my 'crutch.'"  
Godspeed, me. 

I take off up the stairs

I hear somebody's feet pounding up the nearby stairs. I follow, my feet pounding faster than those of whoever I was chasing. "YOU'RE JUST MAKING THIS HARDER ON YOURSELF!" I pant, asthma starting to kick in.

I break out into laughter, almost at the top.

The laughing causes me to stop right where I was and gag a bit. I then walk up the remaining stairs, spotting who I was chasing. I ready my ice-axe. "Come here so I can send this clean through your head."

I pant up the stairs a little ways behind Kieth and decide to make it easy on him.  "Bro, let me handle this.  You have a breather." 
I walk up a bit further and let him decide. 

"This is mine, get out of here..." I tell him before I continue walking up the stairs.

I open the door to the roof and walk out. It was only drizzling now. I close the door behind me and raise my knives over my head.

I open the door and walk out onto the roof before I cough a bit.