He is actually quite intelligent. If you are ignoring an attempt at wisdom, and this person MADE A HUGE paper explaining it, that means they are serious and you should listen to them.
I'm saying he is being hypercritical. You don't need to write a WHOLE loving PAPER on how I did something so little.
All I'm saying is, constructive criticism, use it people, I would use it more often if you did as well.