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Source Filmmaker Mega/Media Thread
Masterlegodude:
Wow, this actually fell to the fourth page
Anyway
I think it looks accurate-ish, but for some reason, something about it just looks weird...
Kochieboy:
Oh god, what has edbotnik done?
Jalenharvey:
My First AND Second SFM Videos:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lG0jm1WcKUs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0e1jL--twI&feature=plcp
Feel free to criticize and PLEASE tell me how to improve c:
Masterlegodude:
The first video has a white line in it which i think there's a way to fix that, but there isn't one in your next video so i guess that's no longer a problem?
Something about the contrast of the second one makes it look like a lot of the colors of lost their saturation or something, the Scout's arms look broke, he hits into walls a lot, his eyes don't look right, camera angles and FOV look rather eugh, you should try to get better angles as well as backing up the camera and zooming in so the FOV doesn't stretch everything towards the edges of the screen, and the camera bounces around too much and sometimes goes into the walls or ground
BlockoCrafter:
--- Quote from: Jalenharvey on July 30, 2012, 08:48:48 AM ---My First AND Second SFM Videos:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0e1jL--twI&feature=plcp
Feel free to criticize and PLEASE tell me how to improve c:
--- End quote ---
wowe scout is best pairkor
But really, if your goal is to make random videos, you're doing good at it.