[100x70] Cerebrated Chronicles - Who thought a party of 8 was a good idea?

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Yosher:
what can i do to make it more interesting?

or better: what do you find boring about it?
i need to know this so i can improve

Tingalz:

--- Quote from: Yosher on October 07, 2012, 04:29:26 PM ---what does this even mean

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He means your adventure is cheesy and terrible. For forgets sake, the bad guys in your story are literally called "The Dark Side".
Stop stuffting up this thread.

Menen:

--- Quote from: Yosher on October 07, 2012, 04:41:21 PM ---what can i do to make it more interesting?

or better: what do you find boring about it?
i need to know this so i can improve

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Reading the Dialog is hard.

Use little face Icons or colors or something. And make it less terrible anime sounding

Aces:

--- Quote from: Yosher on October 07, 2012, 04:41:21 PM ---what can i do to make it more interesting?

or better: what do you find boring about it?
i need to know this so i can improve

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The enemies are generic and don't speak like an enemy would speak.
It's like watching Beyblade or Bakugan.
They should actually sound like somebody who wants the protagonists dead.

And improve the artwork. Motion blurs are not all you require to make something look less hideous.

And improve the combat. I want to actually see that people can die rather than having fast combat that required no struggle at all. (I've been guilty of this in a few adventures.

HellHound:
Imagine something heavy above the guy to knock him out. Interrogate him when he wakes.

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