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Am I good at building?
FadedGlory:
9/10, it looks pretty great dude.
Orion:
you barely gave us any pictures, and what i can see is that it's super boxy and the blinds are spammy (unless this was done for an artistic affect) and you can see the floor from the outside which makes an ugly blend of brown and gray on the outside.
Sylvanor:
6,5/10 nice
jes00:
Needs more pics.
segfault314:
Basically what everyone else said.
Go for more detail on the walls (5-height bricks are horrible for exteriors). I would personally use 1x3 bricks in a brick configuration, painted a mixture of Standard 7 and Standard 8 (assuming you're using the standard colorset), perhaps with a couple of bricks missing to further cement the "abandoned building" look.
Having the floor/ceiling baseplates be visible on the outside is a no-no, especially when they're different colors from the walls.
The vine's a nice touch but IMO it's too "thick." I would substitute some of the 1x1 blocks with 1x1f round studs, to make it look more organic.
The broken windows are cool, but they don't mesh well with the non-broken window bricks. Consider replacing those with 1x4x5 bricks painted Bold 9.
Overall, good build in my opinion.
Maybe we should have a "build critique" thread here.