Please Review a Creepypasta that I made

[Freek]

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[Ad Bot]

[Skateaton 2.0]

last paragraph unscaried everything, shouldn't have even messaged miyamoto.

[Snaffle J. Bean]

stopped after i read the title because vidya centered creepy pasta is overdone and generally stuff

0/10 would not read again

[Skateaton 2.0]

stopped after i read the title because vidya centered creepy pasta is overdone and generally stuff

0/10 would not read again

sounds like something i would read on /v/

[Freek]

last paragraph unscaried everything, shouldn't have even messaged miyamoto.

Okay, I may change the last paragraph to something else.

stopped after i read the title because vidya centered creepy pasta is overdone and generally stuff

0/10 would not read again

Thank you for fully reading. -_-

[Snaffle J. Bean]

Thank you for fully reading. -_-

np feel free to pm me next time you need something proofread

[Camera]

Not very scary, the imagery is something I've gotten used to. :/