So this was made.

[kidplasma]

Body is out of proportion, too long in that one. And you are adding a 3D look to the head but ignoring the rest of the body making it look not so great. :U

Try adding more side faces to the rest of the parts. Don't make the torso too long but make it wider.

We're not focusing on that one anymore.

[Ad Bot]

[Sheath]

We're not focusing on that one anymore.

I would suggest with your current drawing level you consider all advice. The same issues you have in the first image will likely affect your future attempts, kidplasma.

[kidplasma]

I would suggest with your current drawing level you consider all advice. The same issues you have in the first image will likely affect your future attempts, kidplasma.

Hmmmmm... ok.

[Jerkface]

Hmmmmm... ok.

You can take his advice or not, but that's the guy who wrote himself an autobiography because he feels superior to others.

[kidplasma]

You can take his advice or not, but that's the guy who wrote himself an autobiography because he feels superior to others.

I really don't know what to say to this.