Not bad so far, not bad at all. The writing flows very well, which is usually rare among younger writers.
i spent like all day in school thinking "oh boy i can't wait to see what people think of my writing"
The sad truth is, no one on the BL forums reads. ;~;I still think it's great, if it's worth anything to ya.
wait so when did taboo not become 21 and married D:Also I dislike this writing