Just the basic dialogue. Using "loving forgetity forget forgeticus maxiforget" every other word dumbs it down however.
I namely liked the post thing, but had you gotten that "FUUUUUCK" down as a more aggravated tone as opposed to a prepubescent 12 year old "fuuu"
Just overall cuss less, I have a friend of mine who's really big on YouTube videos, like he had a $700 camera, green screens, sound boom, FX and software, he writes script out and practices before he and his buddies record, then when they do record they listen and think about it.
"so I'm loving downstairs of loving course because I'm do loving lazy and I need to loving wash my hands because forget germs, but oh no, now I need to DRY my loving hands but this STUPID stuff WON'T COME APART forget forget forget"
I hope you can see how that comes off as overdoing it.
The potential is there, but your just not there yet. Keep at it though
