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| Mah first creepypasta |
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| hankyje:
>ctrl+f >search ben >find ben >leave Tip for making creepypastas: always use original content, never another story rehashed |
| auzman466:
--- Quote from: Hiiro326 on November 26, 2012, 07:11:35 PM ---GUYYYYS RATE MY CREEPY PASTA I WORKED HARD --- End quote --- trully bootiful |
| Regulith:
--- Quote from: Khorde on November 26, 2012, 07:07:22 PM ---Please complete Middleschool English before writing ever again, please an thank-you. The story was monotonous throughout and it made me feel like I knew exactly what was going to happen. The various oddities (i.e. the shield design and 2 and a half hearts) did not add any form of "creepy" to this story. It felt bland and made up on the spot. This story couldn't shake a leaf. It didn't even feel like a Zelda creepypasta. Sure you mentioned the game, some, but the stuff was focused on your fursona wolfy mcdoggy dog. No backstory on the wolf? Where did the cart come from? Why was it modded by furries? What's going on in this thread? A story has a strong beginning, middle, and end. --- End quote --- 10/10 great review, better than OP's story |
| dkamm65:
I got one. once my wife and I stoped to take a picture of the old post office It was very quiet 10 am in The morning and we could hear a lady signing it was coming from the INSIDE OF THE BUILDING..! she sounded old and soudned like she was singing in church. HWEVER NO ONE WAS AROUND.............. THE NED. |
| Katadeus:
--- Quote from: Hiiro326 on November 26, 2012, 07:11:35 PM ---GUYYYYS RATE MY CREEPY PASTA I WORKED HARD --- End quote --- i cri evrytim |
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