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Winter Bite Ch.2 [Roleplay Server] *No Such Thing As Justice* - Check page 147

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Swat 3:

"Sorry guys, I did not get to save any of you, or help you..."

Prozy:


--- Quote from: Swat 3 on December 11, 2012, 07:28:54 PM ---Wait KEN GOT SHOT?!

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Proreading2012, what kind of 7 year old boy refers themselves in a first person perspective and refers to them as SHE?

Mounds Bar:


--- Quote from: Theportalmaster on December 11, 2012, 12:48:07 PM ---

Now Hosting

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Portal, damn it, 11 o'clock on a school day? We need to get better hosting times.

Swat 3:


--- Quote from: Mounds Bar on December 11, 2012, 09:11:40 PM ---Portal, damn it, 11 o'clock on a school day? We need to get better hosting times.

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...

I don't even...

Kiro:


--- Quote from: Prozy on December 11, 2012, 07:18:16 PM ---Goddamn is it hard to add spelling errors when you're a pro at spelling.

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Suggestions on how he should write:
-no commas
-spell words literally how they sound (no double letters or silent letters)
-no capitalization to certain words (at age 7 he would know about capitalizing names though)
-make sure to spell words the same way if you use them more than once

:D Crazy lil Kenji!

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