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BL Boom de Yada [Video project] - (Almost done!)
Xolerate²:
--- Quote from: Orion on January 06, 2013, 08:54:14 PM ---people
stop spewing feces out of your star fish.
it needs to be CORRECT SYLLABLE LENGTH and CORRECT RHYME SCHEME
you can't just put together sentences of blockland related things and say "here's my song" that's not how song-writing works.
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These are good rhyming schemes.
--- Quote from: Kalphiter on January 05, 2013, 01:56:26 PM ---♫ I love the flat land ♫
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--- Quote from: Xolerate² on January 05, 2013, 02:35:30 PM ---♫ I love to build terrain ♫
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Anti-Block:
I can voice act, my Mic is pretty good
Mysteroo:
I've updated the lyrics to work a bit better and hopefully flow better too. If you think this isn't good or it still needs improvement, please leave suggestions. I am not musically talented and I would appreciate help with this. Telling me it doesn't work isn't exactly real helpful.
And if it's about the syllables, the only thing wrong with the syllables is that "I love Blockland" is one syllable short, but that can be stretched to fit just fine. Otherwise, everything is perfect beat-wise.
gr8dayseth:
I can be one of the normal actors, if you'll be needing any.
Tokthree:
I'd probably be willing to lend my voice to the project