WinterBite Ch3: Strongholds Bloody Course [RP] [CH3 Started!!!]

[rickygaz1213]

In Game Name : AshKetchum
Blockland ID : 6090
Have you read the rules and storyline? : Maybe once or twice, I should go do that right now again.
What roleplay experience do you have : I have roleplayed on many other servers, including different games, I think I'm settled here.
IC Information

Character Name:Jeff Laberso
Characters age: 23
Gender: Male
Future Ambitions: To show what I am made of, help everyone that needs it, and fight anything.
Skills: Great at combat, heal on the go or a great medic, and can climb higher platforms than most people. And.. to make his dad proud of him.

Characters Appearance (In-game screenshot or Describe):


Characters biography/back-story (make this 3-4+ paragraphs and relate to the story): After Jeff heard about the Infection, he drove an airplane before the infection spread even farther to the area that caused it all. He carries his lucky pistol that was owned by his dad, which died in the infection. He thought to stop the infection and kill every zombie that he saw.

Jeff is a caring person, but sometimes can be unthoughtful, rude, disrespectful, and highly mean. But of course, only at rare occasions.. His dad was in the army, after he retired, he sat around home, not doing much. One of his friends was a scientist. The scientist was in the start of the infection, no one knew much about him. His dad found out what had happened, and went to the scene. Shortly later, he died by a zombie charging at him in the back and biting him.

Jeff wishes to help everyone out there with his skill of healing. Since he is great at combat, he is basically, a Combat Medic. He will stop at nothing until the infection stops. His blood could be filled with zombie poison (or whatever you want to call it.), he will never give up. Once the infection does end, he will always remember his dad, even through the war of the zombies.

What faction do you hope to join?
Greenwood Bandits.

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[Aphex]

In Game Name : Aphex
Blockland ID : 45491
Have you read the rules and storyline? : I have read the story line more than thrice, and I have read the rules thoroughly.
What role-play experience do you have : Most Blockland role-plays are really stupid, but some are actually quite fun, this looks a quite decent one, I have not played much of role-playing games in BLOCKLAND But, I have played other role-playing games.

IC Information


Character Name: Max Peek

Characters age: 12

Gender: Male

Future Ambitions: He wishes to find what happened to his parents and cousins, and hopes to save them.

Skills : Main skills - He is a great runner and has a lot of stamina, can shoot bows very well, and can hide very well.

Characters Appearance (In-game screenshot or Describe): Skin: White Clothes are all brown (Ragged), With a Grey beanie, and carries a brown backpack.

Characters biography/back-story (make this 3-4+ paragraphs and relate to the story):
12 year old Max lives in Russia he is a nice kid, and was coming back from school on his bike his father and mother bought for him last year, once he got home he ate a small meal and talked to their parents that there was going to be a test, but they decided they were going to America, for there is better education over there, hopefully they thought, They bought an airplane ticket packed their stuff and flew off to America.

Once they got to America they got a green-card, We had to do a test to be a civilian, my dad asked cho tho? (What's That) And we only knew some of English, but there was a translator, and we got through the transactions, and we settled in California, but it was to hot over there, we had a couple Cousins living in Alaska, so we took an airplane over to Alaska, once we got down we settled with my cousins, and we had a meal.

I went to go register for a school, and went to school for a past week, all was fine until one day when I was walking home near my house glass, doors and some of the walls were torn apart, I quickly rushed in side and saw that there was blood on the floor, and no site of my parents or cousins, I looked around nervous, I got a knife from the kitchen and hear a moan, I slowly walk to the moan and my dad was lying on the floor, he was bleeding severely I didn't know what happened but, then he fell to the ground and died, then some part of him turned he stood up and his skin started to turn a different color, I ran out of the house and tried to find the nearest hill.

I didn't know what happened to my mom nor my cousins, I cried on the hill hoping this was a dream I was getting cold, I went to my friends house, and he was fine I told him about what I saw and he believed me, so we ran away, it was a blizzard outside, we go over a small hill and I turned back and couldn't see him I shout his name, nothing I look back and see a shadow and he waves and shouts "RUN!" I quickly run over the hill and find a small cave and hide there and try and survive or find life or someone who I can trust.

What faction do you hope to join: Republic

[Joltarn]

In Game Name : Joltarn
Blockland ID : 7646
Have you read the rules and storyline? : Yep.
What roleplay experience do you have : I moderated Cysero's Medieval RP for a while in hopes that something good would come out of it, and I've visited various other RP servers. I'm hoping to join this one, since it seems like the first RP server to have an actual plot line as well as plenty of thought put into it.
This character is mostly meant as a way to hop into the server and test the waters, see if there's some niche I can fill.
IC Information

Character Name: Ernest Parnell

Character's age: 32

Gender: Male

Future Ambitions: To eradicate mutants and continue his career of ghost hunting

Skills: Self-employed exorcist and hunter of the paranormal. His actual skills include basic medicine, craftsmanship, and a knack for rifles.

Characters Appearance (In-game screenshot or Describe): A disheveled man with a dark green jacket and brown hunting pants, his face looks like it hasn't seen a razor in a while. He has a large backpack filled with his supplies, as well as a bandolier full of tools strapped to his chest. He hasn't said very much since he's arrived, although he seems to be tinkering with a wind-up music box.

Characters biography/back-story (make this 3-4+ paragraphs and relate to the story):
Before the apocalypse happened, Ernest had no real home, moving from place to place and taking jobs where he could find them. He was a ghost hunter by trade, and he'd become popular in the underground circles. He was famous to those who believed in the paranormal, and widely mocked by those who didn't. He took the apocalypse as a sign that he was correct. Ernest had just finished a job out in the far reaches of the Canadian wilderness when the apocalypse struck.

He didn't realize that the world had ended until he'd ventured back towards the cities, wandering through a ghost town until he came across a large horde of mutants. He went back into the wilderness for a while, living with refugees and small groups of survivors, leaving before he grew attached to any of them. The last group, the group he stayed the longest in, kicked him out after he got into a heated argument with the group leader. He is very reluctant to mention them.

Soon after the incident he found himself in Alaska. After a few days of trudging through the area, he stumbled into Greenwood, deciding that this was where he was going to begin his conquest.

What faction do you hope to join?
Greenwood Bandits, although I suppose he could fit into the Republic.

[firestorm]

In Game Name : Aphex
Blockland ID : 45491
Have you read the rules and storyline? : I have read the story line more than thrice, and I have read the rules thoroughly.
What role-play experience do you have : Most Blockland role-plays are really stupid, but some are actually quite fun, this looks a quite decent one, I have not played much of role-playing games in BLOCKLAND But, I have played other role-playing games.

IC Information


Character Name: Max Peek

Characters age: 12

Gender: Male

Future Ambitions: He wishes to find what happened to his parents and cousins, and hopes to save them.

Skills : Main skills - He is a great runner and has a lot of stamina, can shoot bows very well, and can hide very well.

Characters Appearance (In-game screenshot or Describe): Skin: White Clothes are all brown (Ragged), With a Grey beanie, and carries a brown backpack.

Characters biography/back-story (make this 3-4+ paragraphs and relate to the story):
12 year old Max lived in Russia. He is a nice kid, and was coming back from school on his bike his father and mother bought for him last year. Once he got home he ate a small meal and talked to his parents that there was going to be a test WHEN?, but they decided they were going to America, for there is better education over there, they thought. They bought an airplane ticket, packed their stuff, and flew off to America.

Once they got to America they got a green-card. They had to do a test to be a civilian, and they only knew some English, but there was a translator, and they got through the transactions. We settled in California, but it was to hot over there, we had a couple Cousins living in Alaska, so we took an airplane over to Alaska, once we got down we settled with my cousins, and we had a meal.

I went to go register for a school, and went to school for a week. All was fine until one day when I was walking home. Near the house glass, doors and some of the walls were torn apart. I quickly rushed inside and saw that there was blood on the floor, and no site of my parents or cousins. I looked around, nervous. I got a knife from the kitchen, but then I heard a moan. I slowly walk to the moan and my dad was lying on the floor. He was bleeding severely, yet I didn't know what happened. He then he fell to the ground and died, then some part of him turned. He stood up and his skin started to turn a different color, so I ran out of the house and tried to find the nearest hill.

I didn't know what happened to my mom nor my cousins. I cried on the hill hoping this was a dream. I was getting cold, so I went to my friends house, and he was fine, so I told him about what I saw and he believed me, so we ran away. It was a blizzard outside. We went over a small hill and I turned back and couldn't see him. I shouted his name, but I heard nothing. I look back and see a shadowy figure, and he waves and shouts "RUN!" I quickly ran over the hill, find a small cave, and hid there. I tried to survive or find life or someone who I can trust.

What faction do you hope to join: Republic

After 20 minutes, I went through this entire thing and fixed ALOT of errors. You use commas where you should use periods. Time is not consistent, and neither is perspective. You need to keep with either 3rd or 1st person point of view. I'm also assuming English is not your first language, due to the amount of grammatical errors. Compare this edition, to the original, so you can get an idea of what went wrong.

[Badger]

I'm starting to see a spike of interest.

[Alphadin]

After 20 minutes, I went through this entire thing and fixed ALOT of errors. You use commas where you should use periods. Time is not consistent, and neither is perspective. You need to keep with either 3rd or 1st person point of view. I'm also assuming English is not your first language, due to the amount of grammatical errors. Compare this edition, to the original, so you can get an idea of what went wrong.

Firestorm, your comments on other people's applications aren't necessary and most likely not wanted.

[Catman933]

Firestorm, your comments on other people's applications aren't necessary and most likely not wanted.

I honestly think they are great, if something was wrong with my application I would want to be told that it was wrong so I can fix it.

[Snick0rz]

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I kind of appreciate community efforts at making my job a tiny bit easier.

It still is a tiny bit rude in my opinion simply because it's community effort and not internal effort.

Still thanks though.

[firestorm]

Sorry if I came across as rude. If you wish, I can stop now. I just saw this and thought "Maybe I can help out a bit." It was 1am and I had nothing better to do. Sorry.

[teoras1]

In Game Name : SoNotTottalyT
Blockland ID : 45565 (I used to play blockland before, Just this time I managed to get the full game.
Have you read the rules and storyline? : Yes, I have read them carefully.
What roleplay experience do you have :  I am a huge fan of any apocalypse RP's, Or in general I love to roleplay. Roleplaying probably was the thing that got me into gaming, But I am very picky on my rp's, And I only join good roleplays that have good gameplay options, for example: Winterbite, Funks ME's, Garry's mod roleplays(not on blockland.). I am extremly active on blockland, I get on it almost everyday(Around 90% of the time I am on.)
IC Information

Character Name: Teoras Samaka
Characters age: 23
Gender: Male
Future Ambitions: Possibly restore the worlds past form, before the apocalypse, also restore peace to world and help develop a cure if possible.
Skills: Good driving skills, Good piloting skills(Also one of the most fun hobbies), accuarate shooting, also pretty good on being stealthy. Good security(Or guarding) Skills. Also has some experience with crossbows.
Characters Appearance (In-game screenshot or Describe): White long front hat(Below the NONE) White T-Shirt with a light tan jacket on, brown backpack, light tan pants and black shoes. The clothing isnt very good for the winter.

Characters biography/back-story (make this 3-4+ paragraphs and relate to the story): =====EARLY LIFE==== Born in 1993, his dad was away in Afghanistan as a Sergeant on a 5 year operation. His mom and him stayed at home, whilist Teoras was really educated in computers, he was a semi proffesional with computing. At the age of 4(.5), he met his father for the first time. They really liked each other, they would spend loads and loads of time together. That was until everything changed when he got a call from the local police departament, stating that his mom has died due to a car accident. His father and him were extremely sad and their life got harder. He went to a local school, and his life got very happy after he realized, that he won a lottery. Him and his father moved in a mansion. His teen life was full of adventures. He had lots of friends and, most importantly, his father. One day, nearing the end of the school, his father got a letter stating that he has to go to a military mission. Both were sad, but nothing could be done. He had a brilliant idea, since the military was recruiting from the age of 18, he decided he should join in after he finishes the school. It was like a huge adventure to him.  He went to piloting lessons to learn how to fly a helicopter.

=MIDDLE AGED, AND IN THE MILITARY.=
Once he got accepted to be a private, his father was already a Captain. They got moved into the same Division, It was known as The 75th Heavy Vehicle Support Division, they were moved to the 2nd Support Bridage. They would focus in heavy vehicles, Such as helicopters. There was no action since the nation was peaceful, so he mostly was saving people by flying men to the location they needed to be moved to, Or sometimes, using thermal vision looking for people. That was until a huge alarm was annaunced in the United states. They got transported into the region for air support. His father, being his gunner  would often support the ground forces. Their first mission was to transport some Heavily armored men to the incindent location, where there were reports of a drug overdose, It would affect humans terribly if it was injected wrong. They had to land after a while, luckily his father didnt have to use the guns on the helicopter. They managed to land in the main fleet of ships they came here from, but they were moved to diffrent brigades.. Seperated, and unknown of their locations they split up to diffrent regions of the country, but only to find the main military forces retreating in fear because of the civilians transforming into weird creatures. Teoras noticed his father in the horrizon, retreating back to the country. He had relaxed a bit due to knowing he is safe. Thats how he was stuck in the world of creatures that do only one thing: Eat. (Yeah I know, The story is VERY long, and my grammar isnt the best. Thats because I am European, And English isnt my main language.


What faction do you hope to join? The republic. Since Teoras was a military-guy he wants to team up with his fellow soldiers.

[Swat 3]

Is it me or have I seen a stuff load of applications that weren't reviewed?

Damn it Snickorz you are lazy.

[Theportalmaster]

..They're accepted via PM?

[Alphadin]

In exchange for cutting voice decay, we're going to get FB done faster.

[teoras1]

I am very excited to play on this server. I have been waiting for a while now...

EDIT: Got accepted.