Reign - omg updoot

[PurpleMetro]

wait i'm confused

is the line below the eyes a mouth or the chin

chin. when i get a sprite from either Mr.007 or SirLancelot7, then i'll start

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[PurpleMetro]

since none of us want to wait any longer, i'll just go ahead and start

Joel was sleeping peacefully in his bed until a mass of banging pot sounds came from downstairs

Joel: Ugh, who the hell woke me up?
Joel: Jeez, you can't get sleep for an hour in this house without somebody tearing up the place.

Joel wasn't planning on going back to sleep, so what should he do?

[Cool Boi]

Jump out the window, climb down the tree, and blow up the house.
or, you know, go downstairs

[Shell]

ponder about what's in your hair

also don't inspect the noise. this is exactly how bad things forgetin happen in these adventures. people are so curious about stuff and then they end up getting eaten by an alien or something.

happens all the time in horror movies too.

crawl out the window and get the forget out of there

and give us a view of the side of the room we're looking from because it doesnt look like theres a door anyway

[SirLancelot7]

Bump for my character.  He is on page 1 tho.

P.S. I really suck at making sprites..  Hopefully these will work.

[PurpleMetro]

Bump for my character.  He is on page 1 tho.

P.S. I really suck at making sprites..  Hopefully these will work.

unfortunately no, if i may ask what you used to make it though, so i can try to help you

[SirLancelot7]

Paint lol.

Why won't they work exactly?  I just thought they were ugly.  They seem workable.

[PurpleMetro]

Paint lol.

Why won't they work exactly?  I just thought they were ugly.  They seem workable.

your sprite's general drawing is fine it just has a few size issues

alas, compare your sprite with shell's:

 

to start off, your spritesheet isn't transparent. i can easily make your sprite transparent but it's good practice for the user to make it transparent themselves. microsoft paint doesn't support transparency, and that's a big thing. since your using windows, you should use Paint.NET like alot of other pixel artists are using

next, notice how shell's character and wings are equally sized in blocks. looking closely at your character, you probably scaled it up and drew tiny pixels on it. you need equally sized pixels.

[SirLancelot7]

The pixel sizes won't look great, but will they really make it not workable?

And I've just never used paint.net so I thought working with a whole new program would make me end up with an even uglier sprite, if possible.

[Cool Boi]

I could make an attempt to fix it up if you wanted

[PurpleMetro]

ponder about what's in your hair

That was the pillow, would you rather not have a pillow to sleep on?

Jump out the window, climb down the tree, and blow up the house.

Joel: I wish I could blow up this hell-hole.
Joel: But then where the hell would I go?

don't inspect the noise.

crawl out the window and get the forget out of there

Joel gets out of bed, then opens the window



Joel: Wel'p, might as well climb out



You climb out the window, but you don't really understand why there would be a threat or intruder in your house, or anywhere near this remote peninsula. You stick your head back in the window, to hear if the sound was still occurring. Instead of the pot sound, now you hear a sizzling sound, again, coming from downstairs

[Cool Boi]

A. Search around the house
B. investigate
EDIT:
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[SirLancelot7]

Neat!  Does Cool Boi's repairs make my sprite workable?

[PurpleMetro]

Neat!  Does Cool Boi's repairs make my sprite workable?

yes but you're going to have to get somebody to draw you some new wings too

[Cool Boi]

Neat!  Does Cool Boi's repairs make my sprite workable?

I'm only doing the sprite
The wings are simple enough for you to do on your own.